上个星期天，我，妈妈，弟弟，还有我的朋友陈新瑞一起去香港迪士尼玩，一路上我们都很兴奋，我们老是问妈妈什么时候到达目的地啊？我们等了好久终于到了迪士尼。
Last Sunday, I, my mother, my brother and my friend Chen Xinrui went to Hong Kong Disneyland to play together. We were very excited all the way. We always asked my mother when she would arrive at the destination? We waited a long time and finally arrived at Disney.
哇，迪士尼的风景好漂亮啊，我们好像到了梦幻世界一样。首先，我们去吃了西餐，吃饱了我们就去玩啦。第一站我们去坐了周游世界的火车，途中看到了原始森林里面的长颈鹿，鳄鱼，大象蟒蛇等等。弟二站我们去坐了直升飞机，飞上飞下的感觉很刺激。第三站我们去坐了碰碰车，车轨道很弯，我老是掌握不住方向盘。我们在迪士尼玩得很开心。
Wow, the scenery of Disney is so beautiful. It's like we're in a dream world. First of all, we went to eat Western food. When we were full, we went to play. At the first stop, we took the train to travel around the world. On the way, we saw giraffes, crocodiles, elephants, Python and so on in the primeval forest. We went to take a helicopter at the second stop of brother's station. It was exciting to fly up and down. In the third stop, we went to take a bumper car. The track of the car is very curved. I always can't grasp the steering wheel. We had a good time at Disney.